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قديم 21-09-2002, 12:20 PM
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إفتراضي هل من مصحح؟؟

تحوي القطعه أخطاء املائية ونحوية أرجوكم مساعدتي..


suprises and adventures ...I adored its clam air, beutifual beaches and green tress. there were alot of monkeys walking in the streets .... It was suprisisng me ... there were alot of temples .. such as ... snake temples .. in one spesfic day all the snake come from diffrernt direction to jioin the bigest party ... it was strange and upnormal.. I saw alot of thing that helped me to be patient and clam .. such as insects that I had only see it in the movie or cartoon ...
the most diffcult thing was a visit to the bats cave .. it was full of the danger.. the cave was full of corcodailes and surroned by dark .. the bats made a noise when we came in to the cave ...
this trip change me to another person full of life ...
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